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High Poly Vehicle - Rabitagore - Final
July 2, 2011 - 1:06pm
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Final entries...Thanks Eat3D and everyone participating.
Best Regards
Rabitagore
Hi guys this is my first participation in this forum and I am very happy to start with .My concept is very simple I will try to translate in a hight poly model a sortlike sci-fi military vehicle dedicated as contra-riot for the units of security forces in a megacity.My reference are a view of a Merkava ,a dropship model from the project film "the last cause " and a sketch from the sam Brown blog .=)
Slow beginning... but I started by my blockout and I try to figure out all my parts of my vehicle
cool ! Nice start ! 
I have changed my block out a little bit...
Looking cool so far!
Critique: I would try to give the tread's some unique shapes. As of now, its almost destracting because they are a simple single shape that is so overwhelmingly repeated, its hard to focus on other parts of the vehicle.
Perhaps taking that shape and breaking it up into a few tread patterns would help?
Keep up the great work
-Jeremy-
Nice start
I would maybe add the vertical lines that go around the edge of the tyre, that would help break it up
Thank you for your advice, I tried to make the wheels more interesting and I also changed the general scale of the vehicle. I think I have my shape and I'll stick with, I beginning to see where I ll go ...
OHH nice proges mate!!! i like it very much!!!
Really nice progress on this! I really like the shape of the vehicle 
-Jeremy-
Indeed, excellent progress. Shape looks slick.
Nice contender, good luck!
Finally my sketch the general concept.... =)
I am thinking to add more details on the mesh model during the process of modeling stage .
I love the buggy like shapes. I'm also loving the design, although I see your reference of scale there and I'm like: "ohh...".
Simply cos neither in your WB or your sketch, i see a single scale reference in your model. Anything the viewer is familiar with will help, a window, a door, a hatch, a cockpit, a panel, etc.
Cos at the moment it's looking like it could be of any scale due to it's design.
other than that, spot on! I'm sure you'll gain a lot of points coming up with your own design yourself!
Excellent sketch. I agree with -HP- about the scale. Right now, I'm using the turret? on the top to get a sense of the scale and it seems like this will be a huge vehicle.
Nice sketch again, thumbs up.
Nice painting! Keep the updates coming! I really like how this is coming along
-Jeremy-
Started working on my high polys res ...Thanks a lot with the comments ... very helpful for me because its my first contest with very talented professional .I am very confident about the feeling of learning something by this way... thanks a lot ...
Small updates.......... during the weekend...
nice, that's quite a bit of work you got there. success with your progress
grtz
Fantastic work so far
Im loving all the details. Everything has a nice weight
Nice progress!
-Jeremy-
Just a few advancement on the main shape before thinking about more details ....thanks a lot for all your comments very helpful ...
Very cool
Keep going
New update. I worked the vehicle on its rear .
There is now an arm for open the vehicle top toward back.
Small update...
I decided to not stick any longer with my sketch concept.
Because it's time to give here with more consistency in the details to improve the general design of this vehicle .
Wow it sure has come a long way! Looking really good bud
-Jeremy-
New update added a few details ....
This is looking great
Nice job!
A lot of modification because I wasn't so happy with the way where's my model had turned up in my last update... hope you like it in this new update guys ...
Nice, want to see more detail.
Great
Very nice vehicle!
Love the progress!
-Jeremy-
Thanks for the support guys ...
a small update ...
This is looking really awesome! I do think, like it's been mentioned, you need to go into more micro detail, but yeah loving it!
Really good!
Awesome
Cant wait to see more!
Thank you for your comments ! much appreciated ...
Adding some props and details ...
Small update...
This is fast becoming one of my favourites! It looks awesome!
Thanks a lot for the comment SaferDan =)
Can you please tell us how you are rendering these? I would really appreciate it!!
Great work! Love it!
Thanks Joshflighter
I used 3ds max and Vray ...with HDRI in environment , 2 Vraylights and an AO pass in render element...
Great renders! And nice progress
-Jeremy-
Thanks a lot for all the kind comments!
here is a small update for my final render...
Very Nice! Love the style
-Jeremy-
ohh man that looks so bad ass!
I personally don't like the red tint to it, but its definitely awesome!
Added some low poly views
Finally, I made some other views ....
I will create my turnable also ...
Hey man! That looks awesome! Are you rendering in Max?
Hi SaferDan thanks for the comments ...
Yes rendered in 3ds max and Vray with AO pass ...
By the way added my turnaround video ....http://vimeo.com/27343124
Awesome
Good luck!
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