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"Razion" Concept Car Model
August 4, 2010 - 8:39pm
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I know I know.. I have weak skills lol
There are a couple issues that I didn't decide to bother with because I've been to busy and I need to continue modeling more things. Not to say It wont be fixed/added eventually.
I used Jeremy's tutorial to make the image 
How this?
Its looking really good. The presentation and composition is nice. Try to make a second pass over all the topology again. Try relaxing some of those harsh lines on the hood so it all smoothes out. Try using some shell modifiers to push thin geometry out a bit more.
Keep up the great work! Don't give up, just re-work some stuff. Its on its way to a finished concept 
-Jeremy-
Well most of the hard edges are intentional for the sake of the concept. But I see how SOME edges are unrealistically harsh.
I kinda wanted to keep the hard edges cause I thought they looked cool
But yeah I see what you guys mean. This is my first concept and I find it impossibly hard not to use a blueprint.
And if anyone is wondering why it has no door handles, that is intentional too. Some super cars don't have handles, instead its automatically opened using the remote connected to the key.
And i just noticed I forgot to texture the bar on the side windows. Its all black
Great work Alex! Great to see your stuff on here too!
Hmmm I think there always seems to be a great concern over hard edges and lines in 3D modeling. I think it's more that the bodywork appears thin in some places, which causes some hard edges to look out of place. Perhaps giving the body kit a little more thickness and feeling of weight might help?
But on the other had of course there is no logical reason why the body work of a car called "Razion" shouldn't be crafted like a razor!? After all wouldn't that make it far more streamline!? 
Keep it up the good work Alex!
chat to you soon
TRINITY-JMF
nice attempt razorbut your model needs lots of improvements,door handle missing,lights,hard edges,
presentation is nice ......
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