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Moon Light winter night
June 20, 2010 - 4:45am
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Hi Guys,
Here is my new work...done with 3dmax,V-ray,Photoshop....
Everything is 3D.....Hope you like it.C&C are welcome.
Great Render. I agree with Riki on the dirt additions and corner fixes. Another thing I spotted was the light being emitted from the lantern sitting on the ground next to the lawn (Reclining) Chair. It almost looks like the light is overcooking the ground. I would suggest bringing that power down a good amount, and feathering the falloff a bit more. It just seems too abrupt and hot comparatively.
-Jeremy-
Agreed with the comments............i also feel the same errors....but i was more concentrated in environment fog........will correct it..if i get the time....
Thanks for the forum Spotlight.
Agreed with the above critiques, but I also have to wonder, why are there lawn chairs outside when it would be winter? Wouldn't it be frigid cold outside? If it was me I would model the chairs closed up and set on the wall or something, to give it a lively feel.
you might go with a Late spring for Tittle. If were going for a winter we would have no leaves on the trees? just saying 
I think having those lawn chairs out there is cool. What if you wanted to have a romantic night under the stars all bundled up warm with your spouse, but the lawn chairs were folded up?
Yeah... that would be a motivation killer. lol. Lawn Chairs FTW!! 
Actually there are lots of trees that still retain their leaves during the winter 
(Just saying)
-Jeremy-
I agree w/all the comments and critiques; Very cool Render though....make those minor changes and go from there.
Nice Render. The only areas of improvement I would suggest are these 2:
1. Add some natural dirt and stuff to break up how clean everything is, especially in some corners, toward the bottom of the house, and the ground.
2. The edges on the column in the front is a bit too razor sharp, maybe chamfer it a small amount and try and make it not so straight of a line.
These are minor things I would say overall, great job man! I promoted it to the forum spotlight
-Riki